06 October 2011

#6 Comment on another Blog

Letters from my Heart: # 5 My Experience: "We can never go back and change what has been done but we can always earned the lesson learned to make things better next time..." ...





To comment on a blog is hard for me because I’m not too perfect when it comes in English.
As I read this blog of my classmate about her experience in life, I noticed that she used unfamiliar words to make the sentence more meaningful and wrote on what her title is all about. It’s pint-sized funny to read on her experience especially when the awkward moment has been read. And you make a petite blithe on your face.
I like the way she wrote her artefact but for me, she didn’t know how to use correct punctuation mark and even the ending of the story it has not been put on another paragraph. You can hardly identify where the finale of the story is. But on the other hand, I liked it because of her correct grammar. And I have learned new words.
My advice is, just keep on writing to give you more an idea on how to use correct punctuation mark.

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